Before You Rewrite It, Find Out Where Readers Get Lost.


Send one MLS listing description, agent bio, LinkedIn profile, press release, client email, or newsletter article and receive a detailed review showing where readers become confused, what questions remain unanswered, and where communication breaks down.

$125 Flat Fee
Typical Delivery: Within 72 Hours


What's Included In The Review


  • Reader Experience Review

  • Confusion Points

  • Missing Information

  • Unanswered Questions

  • Structure & Flow Review

  • Recommendations


Documents Accepted For Review

  • MLS Listing Description

  • Agent Bio

  • LinkedIn About Section

  • Brokerage Profile

  • Press Release

  • Newsletter Article

  • Client Email

  • Property Fact Sheet

  • Deal Summary


Request Your Review

Complete the form and tell me which document you'd like reviewed. I'll examine it from the reader's point of view and identify where communication may be breaking down.

No payment is required to submit your request.

You'll receive instructions for submitting your document after your request is received.

Typical Delivery: Within 72 Hours

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